FOR WRITERS OF BOOK-LENGTH PROJECTS
50-Page Manuscript Evaluation
Includes 60-Minute Coaching Call
You have pages. But is the story working? Get honest, big-picture feedback from a PhD-trained developmental editor who understands both the craft and the ADHD brain behind the draft — before you go any further.
What You’ll Receive
Thorough read of your first 50 pages by a PhD-trained developmental editor
Detailed editorial letter covering story question, plot, pacing, character development, author voice, and scene structure
Honest, specific feedback on what’s working and what needs attention — without shame or overwhelm
60-minute coaching call to walk through the feedback together and map your next steps
Who This Is For
Fiction and nonfiction writers with book-length projects — novels, memoirs, narrative nonfiction, science books, books about psychology or ADHD, writing craft books, and more — who want to know if their manuscript is structurally sound before going further
Writers who’ve been in their own head too long and need an outside perspective✧ A personalized strategy tailored to your brain, your schedule, and your goals
ADHD writers who need feedback delivered in a way that motivates rather than derails
Anyone ready to stop guessing and start writing with direction
What This Is Not
This evaluation provides big-picture structural feedback — it does not include in-line edits or line-by-line notes. Think of it as your manuscript’s GPS check: are you headed in the right direction, and do you know what to focus on next?
If you’re ready for deeper, hands-on developmental work after your evaluation, you can explore full developmental editing here.
How It Works
Book your coaching call date (allow 2 weeks for me to read and evaluate your pages)
Submit your first 50 pages as a Word document (Times New Roman, size 12, double-spaced)
Receive your editorial letter before our call
We meet for 60 minutes to discuss feedback and plan your path forward
What My Clients Are Saying…
“I had the opportunity to work with Candice, and she is an incredibly thorough, empathetic, and honest reviewer and editor. She not only helped me improve my current work, she also pushed me to think more deeply and authentically about my writing for the future. Her encouragement fostered real motivation, and her thoughtful critiques always came with clear, workable solutions. During our initial consultation, we discussed my project, goals, and background. After I sent her a draft, she completely exceeded my expectations by returning both suggested edits and a separate document explaining her reasoning. This was invaluable because it helped me understand the “why” behind each change. We wrapped up with a final consultation to discuss any remaining adjustments. I was thrilled with the final product and will definitely hire her again!” — I.A.
Investment: $397
One-time payment. Includes editorial letter + 60-minute coaching call.
Coaching client perk: All coaching clients receive 10% off developmental editing packages. Learn more here.
Ready to Get Clarity?
Your manuscript deserves honest, thoughtful feedback from someone who understands both the craft and the brain behind it.